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alexandraerin ([personal profile] alexandraerin) wrote2011-04-12 06:03 pm

Wrap-up post.

Okay! Wow, what a day. Even though I modified my immediate goal for the day in terms of chapterage, I still finished in the exact same neck of the woods I'd initially aimed for in terms of word count. I got like 5,000 words of Chapter 4. (I'm guessing the stuff I'm holding back from the public draft are around 200 words) I've got 500ish words of a future encounter that will be worked in somewhere else in this story-week.

I've got 1,400 words of Chapter 5, and boy, did writing those words ever help confirm for me that the slowness in starting Chapter 4 was about negotiating the curves. They flowed. They flew. I am going to have no problem finishing that chapter, I can tell you.

Good day. Productive day. I'm thinking that Chapter 4 can still use another coat of polish, so what I will probably do is wake up tomorrow, look at it with fresh eyes, and hammer out a few bits before I post it. Right now it's very much a chapter of "and then stuff happened". I'm not opposed to "and then stuff happened". I'm a big fan of stuff and happenings, as anyone who reads MU regularly knows. But I want to make the important bits pop a bit more.

To take the "curve" metaphor in a different direction, the first three chapters are the cha-klunk-cha-klunk-cha-klunk up the first big hill of the roller coaster. It's a slow, steady climb and it might not be the most exciting thing but it gives you a nice view and anyway there's no getting around the necessity of it. Chapter four is when it's just cresting the top.

Which is to say, it's all downhill from here...

[identity profile] janewilliams20.livejournal.com 2011-04-13 09:39 am (UTC)(link)
I've enjoyed those first few chapters. It's fun seeing how people have changed in the "gap", and the ways in which they've stayed the same. As you say - nice view.


[identity profile] lizkayl.livejournal.com 2011-04-13 05:20 pm (UTC)(link)
A completely random comment: I love your new panda baby bear icon!